Sunday, March 6, 2011

Legend of the NICI World Chapter 3

CHAPTER 3 - Friends or Foes?!

From last week:
"Ma and Mo finally awaked in the new world. Mo found himself in the snowy mountain and met a group of explorers. While on the way to find Ma, the mountain guardian, Detlef attacked them. On the other hand, in the deserted beach, Ma found a stick that can shoot a bright blue beam from its end."

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Upon finding that they are attacked by Detlef, the timid-hearted Mo starts to run away..

Mo: "Noo!!! I have to run.. *woosh..*"

But suddenly, Mo trips on something. On the other hand, the explorers gather their powers to defeat Detlef..

 Mo: "Ouch!! What's this??"
Explorers: "Attack!! Ice Power!!"

Mo realizes that he trips on a wood block and when he turns back, he sees his explorer friends fighting Detlef..

 Mo: "Why are they fighting Detlef? Can they defeat him?"
Detlef: "Aww!! How dare you?"

Apparently, the ice power attack hits Detlef, but it's not strong enough to defeat him. As a counterattack, Detlef drops a large snowball down the mountain slope..

Detlef: "Hahaha.. Here you go!!"
Explorers: "Run!!!"
Mo: "This doesn't look good!! Maybe I can help with this block."

Oops!! Looks like some of our explorer friends don't have time to run, and they are unconscious now because of the snowball.

 Detlef: "See! I told you that you can't defeat me!"
Mo: "Oh no! Here I come!!"

The remaining explorers then tell Mo about Detlef. He is the guardian of The Alts and won't let anyone pass his mountain. However, usually the explorers can make Detlef unconscious using their ice power. Only recently, some unknown bad power came into Detlef and made him stronger. Then, out of sudden, Mo has an idea. Meanwhile, Detlef starts to descend the mountain..

Mo: "Guys, I have an idea. Maybe we can use this block I just found.:
Explorers: "What idea?"
Mo: "With your ice power, make me a giant snowball,
then I will hit it with this block towards Detlef"
Explorers: "Are you sure you can do it?"
Mo: "Don't worry! I'm the master of golf! Trust me!"

And so, the three explorers gather their remaining power to make a giant snowball for Mo. They better be hurry, Detlef has come nearer now..

 Explorers: "Quick! Quick! Hit the ball!"
Mo: "Here I go! Hiyaa.. *Bang!*"

Just as said by Mo, the giant snowball hits Detlef perfectly. Not wasting any time, Mo and the three explorers quickly come to help the unconscious explorers.

 Detlef: "*Duk!!* Owww.."
Mo & Explorers: "Quick! We must bring them to safe place!"

Leaving Detlef lying unconsciously in the mountain slope, Mo and the three explorers bringing their unconscious friends into safety. But where will they go??

Mo: "Run!! Faster!!"
Svenja: "Wait for me! Sven is very heavy. T_T"

Okay.. Back to the beach!! Ma is about to start wander around the beach when suddenly the earth shakes. When Ma turns around..

 Ma: "o_o!! What's that??"

A gigantic wave is approaching him and Ma is carried by the water effortlessly..

Ma: "*Gulp! Gulp!* H-E-L-P!!"

When the water finally calms down, Ma turns around to the sea and see some weird creatures..

Ma: "Uh-oh! What are they?"

What do you think the creatures are? Do you think they will become good friends or another bad foes like Detlef? Find out more on the next chapter of 'Legend of the NICI World' next week! :)

6 comments:

  1. Oooo, seafriends seem to be nice people :))
    Waiting for next chapter soon!!

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  2. Very good chapter, waiting for next chapter!!! ^_^

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  3. Detlef getting hit by the snowball is cute, I actually feel bad for him, hahaha :p

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  4. Fun story! But please, no more snow...we've had snow since November and we can't wait until spring arrives!!

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  5. @Jerry and Ben: Haha.. Promise you the snow will end in Chapter 4. ;)

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  6. Chapter 4 will be postponed till next week due to many unexpected events this week. :(

    I have A/C leakage and packaging stuff to take care of. :)

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